
In a city
Lived a town house.
Through a window
On the second floor
I could see
A garage.
Beyond that
A street,
Beyond that
More houses,
Looking back at me.
But if,
I sat
Upon the floor
Or,
Laid upon the bed
And,
Cast my eyes
Through the glass
Into
The sky
There was
A grand and towering
Pine tree.
He filled me
With hope.
He carried me
Past the sadness of the day.
He taught me
The story
That
Before there was concrete
There was this
Tall and strong
Waving in the wind
Shelter and home
To many.
He taught me
That green
Is the color of kindness.
He taught me
That to sway with the breeze
Is the secret of strength.
He was always there
As close as
My unveiled window
Upon the world.
He laughed
With me.
He cried
With me.
But always
He stayed
With me.
He never needed
Boat or plane
Car or train
To travel the world.
Instead,
He sailed the skies
And saw a million moments
Come and go…
In every pine I see
Stand tall
There is a hint of him
Within them all.
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Written and photographed by Ellie894 February 2018
Very inspiring poem!
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Thank you! 😊
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What a beautiful way to tell about the nature, the trees.
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It was a real tree outside of my childhood window. Thank you 😌
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Wow.
Welcome😊
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If I’d had trees that big outside my window they woulda terrified more cause I watch Poltergeist at a young age. 😀
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😂 love it!
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Wonderful poem and capture♥️ Nature has been a long standing companion to many of us, showering us with their strong, lasting love coming out of their nature, the way you described. Swaying in the wind, mark of strength, travelling without means, seeing everything ♥️
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Yes, it takes us places even when we never leave. Thank you so much 😊
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Such a lovely view from your bed 🙂
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I confess the trees in the photo are from the place I walk these days. The tree from the story is from a childhood window. Take care 😊❤️
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yes, what a totally awesome verse and thoughts. much to contemplate in all you said. those trees are so so, tall! how fortunate you are to have them with you. what a beautiful place. so much power in all the life that surrounds you. you are blessed, especially because you appreciate and commune with it. very moving poem. thank you.
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They are! These trees are a part of my walk and I am in awe of them. I know that some people are afraid of pine trees and will cut them down in fear that they will fall on a house or something else. There are pines around my house that I am most grateful for. Yes, I am so very blessed to have such beauty close at hand. I try never to take it for granted and share it the best way I know how. I’m happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for your thoughtful comments. 😊❤️
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i had names for some of the most prominent ones in the woods where i used to walk.
one is Gemini because it had 2 trunks and was nearly completely symmetrical on both sides. It was a very big old oak.
i completely relate to your appreciation of your surroundings. the pictures in your previous post are awesome throughout. so much beauty small and large. very perceptive shots.
thank you for sharing it.
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Trees are so grand and some are just special. There’s a wonderful pine in the woods I may write about one day that splits into five! Very unusual for a pine. And of course oaks are amazing!
There is so much beauty to see all around us. That’s one reason I started on WordPress, is to share some of it. Thank you for your kind comments. 😊❤️
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I am reluctant to write a comment Suzanne as my words might not reflect how much I appreciate this beautiful and touching poem.
Let me make an attempt. The way you described the magic connection between you and the tree reminds me of the connection between me and my books and those lovely songs.
I feel both the strength and softness in the tree you described. I hope I will find one like yours, who is patient enough to listen to me no matter how messed-up my thoughts are. No judgement, no running away. Only faith and love. Thank you Suzanne. This poem went straight to the heart. 😊❤️
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Your thoughts shine through perfectly Isabelle, and I’m so touched by them.
It was so long ago but I can see him still. No matter what came through my little life…there he was. There are things and people who move us deeply, becoming a part of us for reasons we don’t always understand. I was hesitant to post this.
Like you, my books and music are something I would not want to be without either.
Isn’t it something how a tree or words on a page or a song speaks to our heart and offers us the hope of being loved and cherished beyond our imaginings just for who we are.
Thank you for sharing such lovely insights Isabelle. Please take care, suzanne 😊❤️
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me Suzanne. Yes there’re things and people who move us deeply, it might just be a smile or a few words but I know immediately that I’m understood. It feels like a thrill, so intense. For me it’s more about a feeling, I guess it’s because I’m an emotionally driven person, the feeling always overweights logic. I feel and I don’t have a clear rational sense. Take care Suzanne. You write so beautifully 😊❤️
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Ah, me too! Feeling, that sense that you can’t always describe or point to but…you just know. A sweet gift on no occasion at all. How is that, I sometimes wonder. I have learned to trust it though. Or at least I try to. And when it finds me I so want to be listening and not miss it. It’s not always easy to be that way is it. But I still wouldn’t trade it for anything. Thank you Isabelle. Take care 😊❤️
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Feeling is not something people speak loud about, it’s just my observation or how I feel Suzanne. It may not feel right for some people to talk about feelings. Slightly awkward perhaps. I don’t think I talked much about feelings before I started the blog. It just didn’t feel quite right to make it a discussion topic. Let me put it this way, I think most people keep feelings to themselves. It’s skills, ability, competence and achievement that counts most in our society. Or am I wrong… Showing too much emotions may be considered as a weakness. Sometimes I think I feel too much and too deep and I’m very different from other people. It might be the reason why I almost feel overwhelmed when I realise that my feelings and thoughts are understood. Just like you, I would never trade it for anything. It’s how I’m shaped, and I think being able to feel, to feel deeply is a beautiful thing. Take care Suzanne. Such a pleasure to have a discussion with you. 😊❤️
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No, I think you’re very right. I think that most people value talking about tangibles and achievements that can be more easily measured than feelings. I have shied away from sharing my own for the same reasons you write of so well. Sometimes when I talk or even write I will pause and gaze a bit trying to find the words to fully describe what I feel. You said it absolutely perfectly when you wrote how feeling understood can be almost overwhelming. Overwhelming in a lovely way. It’s like that for me too. Such a treasured moment. Indeed, it’s a pleasure for me too Isabelle. Take care 😊❤️
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😊❤️
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That is beautiful 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Well penned❤
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Thank you 😊❤️
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Amazing ellie894😀 sounds like someone I know😎
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Thank you WarriorTraveller ☺️ Have a thoroughly theatrical Thursday! 😝
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Hahaa. Class! I will thanks & you too!😛
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Hi Ellie, Im glad to discover your blog, like so much your poem, I want to read more… sorry for my english buti… I can improve my Language … Bye for now…
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Thank you Ben 😊
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Beautiful way to show love to nature and marvellously presented
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Thank you for your thoughtfulness. Have a beautiful day 😊❤️
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Imaginative, as always. Imagination is a great tool. I esp liked the pine sailing lines. Made me think of Spenser’s “sayling pine” somewhere in _The Fairy Queen_. Also from a world poetry anthology: “The nostalgia of being a mast sways in the pines.” You’re in good company again.
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Goodness, thank you. What a thoughtful comment. It’s been a long time since I’ve read Spenser. Thank you very much 🌷
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You’re very welcome 😀
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Downright beautiful . Loved the way you just curated this amazing piece.
I would love if you will see my work as well .
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Will do. 👍 Thank you so much! 😊❤️
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Ugh I LOVE that hue of orange when the sun sets like that. I wish I could get that colour in a paint and paint a wall in it. Such a calming, soft feeling.
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Mm, yes a cozy happy spot 😊
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