
As we set out upon our way the very air is charged with excitement!
The scenery is fresh and new despite a hundred walks before…
A dozen scents distract my lelephants…giving me the chance…for once…to arrive at water’s edge…alone…
What should I find?!
Miss turtle well upon the shore. How she must have trudged through muck and weeds to score.
Even now, paws thunder quickly towards us! No time to lose…must act fast…
I gather her up, my hands on either side, whereupon she disappears into her always home. Hurry now, they’re coming!
I carry her before me out along the pier. Kneeling, I set her softly on the water. Promptly she emerges from the safety of her shell, frightened…and swims away…
I imagine a breathless, thank you, popping from the bubble she leaves behind…
All at once, Monsieur le Jacques and Dear Dobby do Right, fly out to greet me! Halting at my side in consternation…
Whatever have you been up to without our trusty selves?
Well, if you must know…I have quite recently saved Miss Greta…from your own brand of torment disguised as playfulness…
Who us? – they query wide eyed with disbelief.
Yes, from you my loves – I reply with a giggle.
Suddenly…
The wild whispering wind…www.true…stirs from the West…one moment, one life, one love…
Welcome it blows against my cheek dropping wisps of hair so I cannot see…
As I put them gently back in place…I look around to find…all are gone once again…safe in the depths…off on adventure…
and I am adrift in the loving caress of the breeze…
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ellie894 May 2018
Very nice. I especially like the line, “Welcome it blows against my cheek dropping wisps of hair so I cannot see…”
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Thank you so much 😊
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There are many great lines here. But you set it all with that first line. It was perfect. This was an absolute pleasure to read. Bravo.
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You make me smile 😊 thank you kindly 🌷
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“s I put them gently back in place…I look around to find…all are gone once again…safe in the depths…off on adventure…”
I don’t know why, but this line makes me sad and feeling blue. 😦
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Moments like that can feel rather blue. Thank you taking the time to read and share such a thoughtful comment. Take care, suzanne❤️
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You’re welcome. As much as it hurts me, I love reading posts like this. 🙂
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Oh…that means a lot to me, thank you 🌷
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Wonderfully whimsical, it made me smile!
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They are a silly duo so often up to something! Thank you so much 😊
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Another lovely read, Ellie. 👍
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Thank you LittleFears 😊
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I really love it!
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Thank you! 😊
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This is so beautifully expressed. I loved it! 😊
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Thank you so much Winnie! 😊❤️
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You’re welcome! 😊❤️
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A moment to be cherished Suzanne. Lovely. What a contrast to the hustle and bustle of urban life. There is a flow of gentleness throughout the little story. You have the extraordinary ability to guide the readers through so that they would live in that moment, to see it and feel it themselves, with you.
I had a memorable experience on Thursday afternoon Suzanne. I had the honour to read your lovely Clyde for the children in the kindergarten as well as the staff. The children were highly concentrated thoughtout the reading time. The story has a philosophical meaning which is universal. We all had a lovely time. Thank you. Take care Suzanne ❤️😊
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Thank you kindly Isabelle, on all counts. The world can be such a bustling place. It’s a blessing to slow for even a few minutes all the while knowing, it shall return.
I’m happy that the reading went well. I will always be touched deeply that you would think so much of it and take such time and care. You are a treasure and I’m so happy to be getting to know you. Take care Isabelle 😊❤️
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Wow. Waxing Dickinsonian with the w–, w–, wind and the illusions it breezes in, the wind itself being who or what?
Try this Coleridge poem, “The Eolian Harp:”
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/52301/the-eolian-harp
…when you have time, if you like, just to expand on what you already are feeling.
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The Coleridge is wonderful! “the soft witchery of sound”. Thanks for noticing the w’s. I wasn’t sure if it worked out. Thank you Rob, have a great week 😊
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I just love it.
A breathless, thank you.
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Thank you Vikram! 😊🌷
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Just captivating!
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Thank you! 😊
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Your writing is therapeutic. I love reading your posts beacause they are always crafted beautifully. Im taking notes..😊💜
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Thank you kindly Sethu. That means so much to me 😊❤️
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Your photo reminds me of the lagoon I live nearby and your poem is already dancing upon its surface…I’m just getting to know you and I’m so glad I popped by today to read this lovely tale!
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Wonderful 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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as usual, an outside of the box work, filled with high intense images, incredible.
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Thanks so kindly Maria 😊❤️
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Fascinating piece !! The ending is particularly alluring. 🙂
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Thank you so much! Have a beautiful day ☀️
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Graciosa, tierna y alegre es tu expresión. Felicitaciones y continúa haciéndolo así.
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Estoy tan feliz de que lo hayas disfrutado. ¡Los perros son muy buenos para hacerme reír! Muchas gracias, Walter. Cuídate. 😊🌷
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