Have you ever noticed how the loveliest things have no real beginning
Or at least not one that you recall
It’s as though they always were…
And never were not…
Once upon a forever fireflies sparkled in a dear night sky
Even now I can see them dancing before us
Tiny stars, you told me
They left the heavens to embrace we two
In a playful magic rarely known
And so we find ourselves here again
Hand in hand at the dusk of a long long day…
Are you hungry, you ask
I only smile in return
You know why
You always know why
Me too, with a wink and a whisper you softly reply
The offer of your strong and gentle arm
And off we go in search of our enchanting corner
Almost as cozy and warming
As your touch upon my skin
I like it best when the space is nearly empty
With only a candle between us
We have it all to ourselves
Inviting soft exchanges
And lingering gazes…
Let us then venture from our blazing hearth
Closing the door in sweet knowing
That soon enough we shall return…
For now we journey outward
Pausing…where no one else in the whole wide world would notice
I love this place
Soft graffiti swirls tangle in brilliant confusion
I tighten my hand in yours
You know why
You always know why
Hidden among the cherry reds and the lime greens
Of an artist’s dream gone wild
Our own initials are tucked safely in an inky heart
I like to reach my fingers out to them as we pass
Recalling another firefly moment
When in silly tenderness
I bade you stop and turn around
Don’t peek, I teased
You knew why
You always know why
I could feel you smiling behind me
As I carved us forever into being
Then you held me close to your heart and
Loved me for it
I like that part best of all…
And so this eve under a soon to be firefly sky
As we slowly make our way
I tighten my hand in yours
Asking, may we pause
You know why
I love the way you always know why…
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ellie894 December 8, 2018
Wow! I loved this very much! Thank you! Maybe I should start writing about topics other
than chitlins! 🙂
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😃 I don’t know…I’ve read your thoughts on chitlins…they’re pretty poetic! Thank you much! 😊
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Beautiful! Random thought: wouldn’t it be great if fireflies came out just when it started snowing?
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Thank you! 😊 All random thoughts should be so brilliant! Fireflies and snow, now you have thinking. The real question is, do I add in Dobby…🙃
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One should always add Dobby.
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🐶😊
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Utterly beautiful and so, so rich. Just perfect Suzanne!
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Thank you so very much Bill! I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. 😊
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My pleasure! It was lovely!
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Have a marvelous evening 💫
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I will Suzanne…and I wish the same for you my friend.
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I love the way you always know why. How sweet Suzanne. It smelted the heart. ❤️
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Thank you Isabelle. I’m so happy you liked it. 😊❤️
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Expressions like this make one ponder what has been overlooked.
Such a beautiful flow of emotions. Powerful stuff!! 🙂
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Oh goodness, I suspect one could write for a lifetime on all that’s been overlooked. 😊
I shall pick up my pen straight away!
Thank you so very kindly 🌷
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Nicely done.
Meanwhile, my assignment is completed. Please check it out? 🙂
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Thank you,
I did give it a read! Very well done! 😊
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Thank you! It was kind of plain, but faithful to what I read and notated. I actually liked Walter Pater’s version, found in _Marius the Epicurean_, better. Have to dig that out again.
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Really great, thank-you,
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Thank you so kindly 😊
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I particularly liked the refrain.
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Thank you 😊
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I loved this.
Both the scenes conjured up by your words as well as the relationship described in the poem.💕
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Thank you so very kindly 💕
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Words and photo, nicely done!
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Thank you! ☀️
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So wonderfully romantic!
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Such a beautiful comment, thank you! 😊
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My pleasure, I always enjoy your work!
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😊❤️
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Have a splendid evening!
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Oh Ellie. This poem is incredible. Thankyou for the Follow. I am following you now, too. Your poetry is lovely
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I was very touched by your writing when I came upon your site. Thank you for such kind words and for the follow. My site is named ellie for my sweet labrador. Please feel free to call me suzanne if you like. Take care 🌷
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Oh bless you Suzanne. I have a rough collie called Hope. She is almost three years old. Thankyou so much for your kind wirds.
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I imagine she’s wonderful. I had a collie once. They’re such lovely sweet dogs.
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They are really beautuful. We have always had collues. We named her Hope. Ecayse we git her when I went into remission from serioys advanced cancer – a sign if new life and hope. She is very alive!
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Oh…her name is just perfect. How beautiful that you have her. How beautiful that she came to you in such a moment of remission. Our furry friends are so good at comfort and joy!
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Indeed they are!
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I’m very happy to have found you blindzanygirl 😊
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Awesome!
I’ve selected you for the Sunshine Blogger Award!
https://ireneity.wordpress.com/2018/12/10/the-sunshine-blogger-award-2/
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Thank you!
And thank you again for such and honor! So very kind of you 🌷
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You’re welcome! ❤
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Sweet and evocative.
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Thank you kindly 😊
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Love..
Beautiful poetry
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Thank you kindly 🌷
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Very beautiful 🤗
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Thank you so much! 😊❤️
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Happy New year when It comes
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Thank you, Happy New Year 🙂
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Love is yours and you his
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😊 thank you kindly.
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