I cannot yet say that there’s a welcome chill in the air
…but it is finally September…
Could you hear the sigh in me
As I wrote it out full…
September…
Last night a deer felt at home in the field
This morning,
A hawk graces the sky above me
My creek saunters on
As lyrically as always
To wherever it goes
But to my gaze it all seems the tiniest bit different
Far more exquisite than mere words
Can tell
It shimmers from the inside
As though by a faery’s whispered spell
I take a step
And another
…and another still
Gentle ones made carefully
So as not to disturb the tender things
That call the ground home
While I search the pine straw for a feather
…there isn’t one to be found
Perhaps there will be when I return
In time for the sun to wish me goodnight
Oh, eventime…
Will the colors be brilliant in their last hurrah
Or faded and comforting
Like my favorite soft jeans
We’ll see
But I don’t want to miss this moment
In anticipation of that one
And so back to now,
Woodpeckers knocking behind me
And turtles preparing to laze themselves long
Hour after hour
Upon the finest fallen log
I wonder at what they will see
While I am away this day
I breathe deeply in
The sweet air of a new dawn
After all it is September…
Some days there is a peace that comes
That nearly overwhelms me,
As silent as a single feather drifting
As mighty as the golden setting sun
All at once my heart knows
Beyond all knowing
That this…
…this is what love feels like…
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ellie894 September 4, 2019
I could play with these thoughts a while longer and make them just so. I wonder if I’ve made a mistake somewhere that I’ll discover only after I share. So please forgive any missteps. I want only to give them away before this day gets away from me. They’re yours now and my hope is that you’ll find something lovely in them of your very own to keep. May you all find joy and kindness in the days ahead. ❤️
Being a city boy I always find your words so comforting.
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I grew up in a big city so I know what it feels like to be there too. If my words can offer some small comfort, I’m awfully happy for that. Do take care Malkie 🌷
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“The finest fallen log” might be all we really need. 🧡
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I’m smiling thinking how right you are. A simple place to just be. Thank you 💛
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Autumn is the best! Wonderfully written
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Yes! It’s my absolute favorite! Thank you ever so kindly ☺️🌷
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That chill always seems to arrive, prompt as anything, on the first day of September.
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Isn’t it wonderful?! Although mornings won’t really chill here for a few more weeks. But there’s promise in the air. September is a delight to me! 😊🌷
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Hi. Your poem has reminded me that autumn is on its way. It’s my favorite season. Cooler temps. The changing colors of leaves. Can’t beat it.
See you —
Neil
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Hi Neil. It’s my favorite too! Crisp air and such colors! I imagine you have amazing colors up where you are. I have to wait longer for them down here.
Thank you and take care,
Suzanne 🌷
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Hi. The trees here will begin to change color in maybe five or six weeks. It’s a great event!
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I look forward to what you’ll share when they do! Happy September! 😊
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Thank you for sharing the peace of nature. Your words Express the feeling so well I feel as if I’m walking with you.
🌳🐾🌄💌
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You are always welcome to come walking with me 😊. I school year is off to a good start for you! Thank you for your kindness 🐾🌳🌷❤️
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Aaahh, the love of nature in the fall…. beautiful…..
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Thank you so very kindly Ivor… do take care, suzanne 🌷
P. S. My site is ellie after my sweet pup… I answer happily to either name ☺️
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Ok Suzanne ,,, if forget that, I’ll call you Ellie ..Cheers. Ivor… you might like this Autumn song..
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Such a beautiful song. I had never heard it before. Thank you so much for sharing it Ivor 🌷 Cheers ☺️
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My Pleasure Suzanne
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Lovely poem Suzanne, it reminds me of my teens growing up in the country, that ow of Autom is the part of the reason I chose it as my middle name.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Oh! Thank you Dawn for sharing that with me. How beautiful to have such a lovely time of year as your very name. All my best to you 😊❤️
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Your welcome dear 😀 and thank you dear.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Suzanne this is just lovely! Peaceful. Looking forward to your next post😊
Nina
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Thank you Nina! Your encouragement does my heart good. I’ll try not to go so long between posts 🙃❤️
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Aww—it’s lovely to read your words whenever they arrive! Enjoy the fall season. My favorite 🍁😊
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Oh Suzanne! This is WONDERFUL!!! I’m so happy You shared it just as it is. I don’t think a misstep is possible in Your beautiful words!!! Thank You! 🙂
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Thank you thank you sweet Katy! I’m so happy you enjoyed it!! 😊❤️
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With this lovely poem, you put me to the perfect autumn mood. Autumn used to be my favourite season when I was a young girl living in Shanghai. Summer there was unbearably hot and I longed for autumn to cool me off. But things’ve changed since I moved to Norway. Summer here is rarely associated with intense heat so I heartily wish that it could last…for ever. Because once the autumn has come, the winter isn’t far away. And then it would be snow and wind for months. Your poem, however, reminds me of the beauty of autumn. The autumn colour is a treasure in itself. Take care, Suzanne ❤️
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I guess here it is like when you lived in Shanghai. The next few days will be over 100 degrees. Autumn is such a sweet relief after the long hot summer. But in Norway I imagine the signs of autumn might make you a little melancholy, sad to say farewell to the beautiful days of summer. Thank you for sharing it with me. I’m so happy these moments gave you something kind. Take care Isabelle ❤️
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You think and write really good how are you theys days
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Thank you kindly. Hope all is well with you. 🙂
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Hi iv just had that operation Thoracic Surgery after all that Time not nice to have but iv got Though it all fort I’d message you because only you new when I had first Thorax I had a lot of them my lung operation part cut away and staple d my right side feels odd after this Thoracic Surgery but am still Alive that’s all what matters by the way thanks for being cool talking to me back then before and after Phil Collins concert this first happen d how are you doing
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You’ve been through a great deal. I hope that you will heal and life will go well for you. Take care.
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Happy Christmas Ellie yep am still here after everything iv been Though 👍
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Happy Christmas Mark 😊🎄
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This poem is absolutely exquisite. I read it using my mouse to reveal only one line at a time, and I would encourage others to read it the same way. Now, of course I am left wondering, how could you have known the way I feel about September–and expressed my experience better than I ever could have myself?
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September is far more like New Years for me than January ever will be. Your comments are always so thoughtful Liz. I can’t tell you how much it means to me that you take such care in reading. Warmest thanks and a peaceful September to you ☺️❤️
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Thank you, Suzanne. I hope your September is peaceful and renewing as well.
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Thank you ☺️
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what a pretty picture, you paint with words,of what I always think of as a gentle month
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It sort of settles in you, doesn’t it. Thank you so much Maria. Enjoy your days ahead ☺️❤️
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thank you
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No mistake, Suzanne… if I could only describe Oktoberfest the way you describe Septemberfest 🤗 Wonderful way with words 😊
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Oh, thank you Matthew..you write beautifully about the joys of Oktoberfest so that’s high praise indeed. 🤗. Have a wonderful week 😊 🌷
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Autumn brings a hopeful warmth with the cool air. 🙂 Love the writing ❤
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So much so, you have a beautiful way of saying it. ☺️ Thank you ❤️
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Welcome Suzanne 🙂😊
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