
Early I walked,
*
As the rain came bold
From a heavy sky
The drums, they thundered
Inviting me to dance along
Yes, I said
Without ever asking why…
*
Soft and steady
Stronger now
On and on they fell
My footsteps, and the rain…

Droplets gathered
On the tip ends of the trees
And not a word was written
Not one, not by me
*
But, they are waiting,
Closer than you think,
Can you hear them rolling in the thunder
Do you know them warming in your soul…
*
Slow yourself,
In a delicious kind of way
And, let the rain sing to you…
*
Let it take you in
Become a part of it
No longer a page,
Of broken notes
Instead,
….a song…so very whole…

It is enough to dampen your skin
But not your spirit,
Everything it touches
Echoes with a different tone
A harmony of melodies
Heretofore unknown
Discover yourself
…wandering,
no longer in the woods
but, through the very music itself
raindrops gently on the leaves
and the bark
and the pine straw floor…
here a piano
there a violin,
drums to the heavens
cellos to the depths
and yes…even upon
your soft wet skin…
the stage is simple…
the composer unseen…
and you the only audience
to this song of a lifetime
played within a dream…

Early I walked in the rain…
*
And so it is,
That I wrote
Nothing at all…

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ellie894 March 8, 2020
It’s raining here are this lovely song makes me want to wander out… Ben will not allow, so I must dance in my imagination.π§βππΌπ
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Hope you can enjoy the rain on the outside from the inside. π in your imagination it can be any song you want it to be Queen, Led Zeppelin, Doris Day or Handel, anything! And you have an amazing songbook in your heart Angie. Youβve gifted me some new ones. Sending hugs your way and wishes for a happy Monday morning! βοΈπ§πΆππ€
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Hi Suzanne.
Nature is music!
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Hi Neil.
Yes, Isnβt it wonderful! π
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You write so beautifully β¨ I ran in the rain today and thunder was in the distance, this poem brings me back to that, laughing with my sister and my mum who didn’t have a hood π These last couple of weeks the weather has brought me down but recently being out in it as opposed to shut inside has made me find it soothing instead π¦οΈπ«
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Iβm so glad you made some happy memories in the rain π Those are sweet times. Thank you kindly Elsie β¨π· keep running in the rain βοΈπ
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Beautiful words and photos!
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Thank you! Still pondering π
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As soon as I saw the title of your post, the song I heard was “Song Sung Blue” by Neil Diamond, a fitting accompaniment to your lovely poem, I think. The rain you describe is the rain of my childhood, when the rain drew such wonderful scents from the earth and the trees.
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I love that song! It does fit perfectly ππΆ. Yes, childhood rain that your not trying to escape from because you know dry is waiting for you inside so you can just let go and play. Thank you Liz ππ·
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My pleasure, Suzanne! Thank you for evoking pleasant memories with your writing.
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I’m going to keep this one bookmarked for the rain that we expect later this week!
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Nice! Iβm thinking you will be puddle jumping while Max watches suspiciously from the window! π
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Suzanne, I don’t even have the words to tell You how much I love this beautiful poem. You filled my heart and gave such pure voice to what that feels like; what it is to walk, to BE in the rain. Smiling so big. Thank You for starting my day so sweetly!!! Sending Huge Full Moon Hugs Your way!!! π€β€οΈπππ
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Thank you dearly Katy π₯°. I hope you can have a sweet rain day soon. I imagine your thoughts fill with songs when it rains!! Yes, this very day! Full Moon Hugs full circle to You!!! π€β€οΈππ§π¦π
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My pleasure, Suzanne!!! And I’m saying yes to a Full Moon Hug full circle! YES. You’ve inspired a lovely rain walk next time it happens. Sending butterflylaiden duckquacking hugs Your way!!! π€β€οΈπ
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Full Moon Hug Circle!! Superelasticbubbleplastic way to start a week π. Happy painting!! π¨ππ§π€π¦β€οΈ
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Indeed!!! π€β€οΈπ!!! Thank You and happiest of happiest weeks to You!!! ππ€ππΌππ¦!
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Thank you!!! π€β€οΈβοΈπ§
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π!!!
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wow π² this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have read of your writing so far. I felt so at peace after reading it. ππ§π
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Goodness me, thank you for such a lovely comment. βΊοΈYou touched my heart this morning and gifted me a smile. Iβm very humbled. π§π¦π
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βIt is enough to dampen your skin
But not your spirit,β I π this.
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Thank you π₯° Have a sweet day, rain or no rain ππ
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Damn beautiful! Loved it β£οΈ
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Thank you so very much β£οΈπ
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Beautiful
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Thank you β€οΈ
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Rain drops are amazing. Bringing life to every part it touches also forming a melodious concert to which every human soul wishes to dance.
This song is beautiful Suzanne.
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Thank you for the lovely thoughts Kritika ππΆ it is just like that, isnβt it π₯°π¦π§
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True that is. Good Morning π Have a bright and shiny day.
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Good morning π Thank you π A bright shiny day to You too π€©βοΈπ
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Ohhhhhhh Suzanne. How do you do it. The utter sensuality and spirituality, combined and woven together, heaviness and lightness all in one. Completeness. I feel enlivened and satisfied all at once. Much love to you and gratitude. β€οΈ
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Dear Lia π…thank you. Youβre such a lovely listening reader. It shines through your writing. Please take care. With much love and hugs π€β€οΈ
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Thank you and likewise, Suzanne, on all counts. πβ€οΈ
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You wrote my rain.
You wrote the rain that folows me home,
tucks itself in my pocket,
hides in my ears,
waiting for the song on my windows.
You wrote my rain here.
Rippled and beautiful.
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Thank you John, so very much. You are a kind reader and Iβm touched by the time you take π·
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Honoured
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This is amazing. Wow. I love how you put music and rain together so eloquently. This made me tear up, so beautiful.
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Please know that Iβm very touched by your kindness. Iβm so happy you found something in it π
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Aw any time π thank you
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Brilliant π
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Thank you so much π
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