
Once a snowflake fell
Upon a mountaintop
And melted into
..an ever flowing stream
Even then,
It did not stop
As the gentle river became
A dream, floating on…
And on, or so it seemed…
Once a snowflake drifted, now
A drop of water,
In its travels did carry long
Unto the ocean deep
It wound its way
It found its way
In daylight hours
And, in the ones
..of deepest sleep
Around the world
Again and overmore
…how long..and long
no one knows, for sure
No calendar
Nor clock to keep
As gracefully, time did
Pass..
without a warning,
Or fanfare or anything much
The soulful drop,
was gathered and lifted
From where it had been
As if by a purposeful hand
Taken so carefully
From the waves of the sea
..to the dryness of the land
By way of the rolling thunder
Trumpeting, the dawn’s question..
Sounding the awakening
That knows no earthly bounds
And so, given
By sun and bluest sky
This lovely…once a snowflake,
Once a stream
Once a river
Once a dream
Once an ocean
Once a rain
Once a touch of everything….
Now a gentle dewdrop,
..at rest upon my skin…
….for but a moment in forever…
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ellie894 April 24, 2020
Beautiful Suzanne
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Thank you Drew ☺️
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Reflective of your beautiful spirit and soul. You wow with words, Suzanne. 🤗
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Thank you dearly, Kavitha Hugs 🤗🌷
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Your poem has a serenity and flow to it.
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What a lovely compliment, thank you Sadje 💙
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You’re welcome Suzanne
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😊❤️
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😍
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What a gorgeous image. Look at that pine with the sun in its hair. And your words… so lovely. ❄️⛈🌤💧💛✨
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It was a stunning spring morning, just the way it should be. I’m so grateful for it and for you 💧💛🦋🤗💝
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Thank you for sharing it with us so perfectly Suzanne 😚👌🙏💕
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💞🥰🙏⛅️ always a joy Lia 🌷
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Your words remind me of a song…”Monsoon” by Jack Johnson
💦🌧🌊💧💌
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Oh, it’s perfect, thank you for sharing it with me. It’s such a gift of yours 🎶🤗💝🌊💛💌
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I’m glad you liked it. I’d be lost without the internet… I remember songs but rarely the artist and title. Sometimes it’s just a line of lyrics…😂😂 I didn’t remember to title of this one, just Jack Johnson. Thank goodness for googoo 😘💌💝
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Have you ever seen, “if google was a guy”? There’s a few of them and they always crack me up 😂 😘💝💌
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I haven’t… I’ll have to check that out. If I can remember 🙄😂
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It’s pretty goofy 🙃
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Everything is interconnected.
Real nice poem, Suzanne.
Neil
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Very much so.
Thank you, Neil
Take care 😊
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Beautiful. I liked it.
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Thank you! 😊
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For a reason unexplained (best we don’t look too closely anyway) your poem reminded me of a time, a summer long ago, when I was hiking along the Continental Divide in Colorado. I was fascinated by the notion that a drop of water falling to my left would run to the Pacific Ocean while one dropping to my right would eventually find its way to the Gulf of Mexico. As it occurred there was a summer thunderstorm late in the day and I recall sitting in my tent and being grateful that I got to see the rainfall allocation in real time. Thanks for the memory.
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That is an amazing thought isn’t it. And there you were, right there watching it. What a wonderful memory. Thank you so much for sharing it 😊
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It’s a delight to follow the snowflake’s long journey, and it’s lovely to hear that it finds home in… you, Suzanne ❤️
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Thank you Isabelle ❤️ for reading so carefully and sharing such lovely thoughts 😊
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Your poem flows like the river 🙂
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Thank you so very much 💧🌷😊
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A beautiful beginning all through to the end
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I am touched by your kind thoughts, thank you ☺️
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My pleasure
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Oh I love the way you brought this around to the dew drop…beautiful.💓🤗
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Thank you, happy you enjoyed it 🤗💝
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😊💓🌸💧
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💧🌼💛❄️🤗
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Beautiful
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Thank you ☺️
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😘😘😘
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🥰😘🥰
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❤️❤️❤️
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A beautiful expression of becoming one with all things. I enjoyed it.
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I’m so happy that you did. Thank you for taking time to share such a kind thought. 😊🦋
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It was my pleasure! Thank you for writing it.
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This reads like a beautiful hymn, I think this might be my favourite piece of yours yet. 🙂
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Thank you, that means a great deal to me 😊🌷
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I love how gently written it is.
The real reach of fingers stroking dewdrops.
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Thank you, so very kind of you 🌷
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☺️💫🥀
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🥀💫☺️
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SUZANNE! I love this!!! So very beautiful. You profoundly reminded me…gifted me that knowing of wholeness in my heart. I remember hearing somewhere, sometime that all the water around is all the water that’s ever been here and that any given drop of rain may once have been water that Christ himself walked through….or that Einstein played in…or that at one point in its journey sat on top of Mt. Everest in the midst of heaven….I can’t stop smiling! Maybe the rain that fell here last week was in Your beautiful lake last summer. How fun! Thank You more than I can say for this….sending You the HUGEST hug and tons of Love! 🤗❤️🙏🏼🌀😊
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Katy! Thank you!! Isn’t it positively amazing to think of. Mind boggling and settling all at the same time. I’m so glad you shared this with me! And it’s a very hopeful thing isn’t it, that all shall be well in some way that we can’t quite understand yet. But the lovely little things of the world point to it, that it should be so. Now, when I look at the water or watch the rain fall I will get lost in wonder at where all of the drops have been and which one of them You might have played in, in the summer lawn sprinkler as a child 😄. Remember running through on a hot summer’s day squealing when you got drenched even though that’s exactly why you were running through. Have a beautiful day! Thank you again, hugs and ducky wishes!! 🥰🦆🌧❤️🤗🌦🦋☀️
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Ahhhhhh. Suzanne! You just gifted a wonderful laugh! YES! I remember! What sweet a memories are those?!! This will make You laugh. And may explain much about me. 🤣I live on a small island that had a MUCH smaller population back then. During the summer the mosquito trucks would come around at night spraying. DDT. Yup, that’s right. And all us kids would run outside and play in the spray all the way down the street shouting out, “It’s raining!!!” I can’t even believe not one adult realized this was not a good idea, but have a wonderful laugh over it now and again. A neighbor who grew up here as well and I were reminiscing about it the other day, laughing our heads off. The mist looked truly magical under the moonlight and porch lights! Lord! 🤣Did that happen where You grew up? Thank You for the hugs and ducky wishes! They are coming right back at You, DDT-FREE….of course!!! 🤗❤️🦋🐞🌺🦆🦗☀️🌈🌊!!!
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OMG! Laughing Katy! Yes! I grew up in Houston I would say mosquito capital of the world but it’s probably not as bad as all that. 🤣 Those misting trucks came around the neighborhood when I was a kid too. I remember them driving slowly down the street like giant sprinklers 🤣. You were a kid outside in summer, even if you stayed in your yard it still kind of got you! Which reminds me of how I would STAND in the front seat of the truck while my dad drove…because you know…so I could see…because that was really important 🤣. Seat belts? What seat belts?? I confess I’m mesmerized though at the thought of you living on a small island. Sounds enchanting! DDT FREE, it’s the way to be! 🤗🍭🌈☀️🌧🍄🌺🐞🦋🐛🦆💝!!
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OH!!!! I love that You are a mosquito truck child as well!!! TOO FUNNY! I should have known! 🤣🤗😅! And yes…..seatbelts!?!! Who needed them?!! I think people of our generation (and before, for sure!) have some pretty funny memories!!! 🤣DDT FREE, indeed, these days! Now, even though they use something WAY less toxic; when I hear the mosquito truck coming I RUN indoors! 😅And yeah…this is a sweet place. CROWDED these days….I’m often saying it’s gonna sink if people don’t stop moving here! But sweet! I hope You have one of the best Sundays You’ve had in a very long time. Topped off with wonderful cookies, even!!! 🤗🦋🦆🌈☀️🦋🌊🐛🐝🦄🦚🐕!!!
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🤣 I hope you don’t sink!! Yep, a mosquito truck child!! 🙃😂 I never thought of myself that way but there it is. 🤣. And nothing fancy to trick or treat with…a pillowcase was all you needed and the dump out on the floor when you get back to sort it all 😍😜. Thank you Katy, I wish the same to You, a stunning Sunday full of blessings and No mosquitoes!! 🤩🌿🦋🎶🤠☀️🍀🌷🤗❤️
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OH MY GOD! WE used to use pillowcases to trick or treat as well!!! I’d forgotten about that! I kindof laugh at the cute little pumpkins and bags kids use now. We meant serious business! I think we would have been good pals as kids!!! How funny. And YES! Dumping it on the floor was a thrill. Too funny. And guess what? Your wish came true! A stunning Sunday it was! Thank You! Let’s have STUPENDOUSLY BRILLIANT weeks, shall we? Our starting line is a hug circle! Ready, steady….GO!!! 🤗❤️🐝🐛🌊🐞🌀🙏🏼🦆😀😊🌺
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Yes! We definitely would have been good friends as kids!!! I’m ready steady girl! Here’s to a STUPENDOUSLY BRILLIANT WEEK!!! Hug circle….GO!!! 🤗🌸🦄🌟🦆🌀🐛….🦋 ta da! ❤️. You always make me smile, Katy…thank you for that 💝
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And You, me!!! 🌷😀🦋🦆😬🦄🌀🤗❤️!
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This time shall pass hopefully. Soon or sooner but yes it will in its owm time. 🤗
Love the poem. 😍🌌
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Thank you…hugs 🤗🦋
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🌞🌷 hugs
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I loved this!💙
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Thank you kindly! 💙😊
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I love how the whole poem came together at the end. Nice.
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Love the imagery
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Thank you 😊
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Well done! You might enjoy this… https://petersironwood.com/2020/05/08/snowflake/
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Thank you! I did enjoy it very much, strongly written 😊
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Hey Tex, good morning to you – today you are our Guest Star 🙂
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2020/05/10/the-hello-122/
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Good morning Rory! Thank you 😊🌟
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Pleasure Tex 🙂
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😊
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Happy Monday to you Suzanne 🙂
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2020/05/11/the-hello-123/
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Thank you Rory 😊
A beautiful Monday to you 🌺🌼🌸
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And always backatcha 🙂
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😊🦋
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Thank you!! 😊💝
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The soulful drop was gathered and lifted. This is so awesome. I love this ♡
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Thank you 💝😊
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🙂 you’re welcome hugs!
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Hugs! Have a wonderful whimsical Wednesday 🤗🍄
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Thank you so much lady I’m out taking pictures of birds 🙂
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Hope you got some lovely ones 😊🐦🐦🐦
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Thank you!!! I actually did!!!
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Sweet! 😊
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Yes!!!! I will have to get to posting a blog with some of them. I have no clue what these birds are. They’re so neat!
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Best kind!!
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🙂 absolutely
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I hope you have a great Wednesday too!
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Thank you!
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Good morning to you Tex – some Aerosmith for you 🙂
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2020/05/12/the-hello-124/
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Thank you Rory 😊
I would say great Tuesday music but it’s great anyday music 🎶 😊
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Absolutely even for recycled people ….. 🙂
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😊
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Hey Good morning to you Suzanne 🙂
The 1970’s greeting … https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2020/05/13/the-hello-125/
Have a lovely day!
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Good morning Rory 😊
Thank you! You have a lovely day too! 😊
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I can but try as can we all 🙂
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😊indeed tis true
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Mm, you are going to have to right a new post Tex!!
My good morning notifications are dominating this [you can delete them off each day if it makes it easier] As in offloading the riff raff ….
On that note have a lovely day …
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2020/05/14/the-hello-126/
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Hehe! Thank you for the morning giggle. 😊on this Thor’s day and for the kind wishes as well.
Have a lovely day yourself Rory 😊
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Many thanks Suzanne – the surprises don’t stop here – l have just gifted you a compliment as well 🙂
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😄 thank you! Very kind of you 😊
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Always a pleasure 🙂
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😊
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So Beautifully expressed! Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Thanks also for stopping by guidelinesweb. 💞
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Thank you so very much! It was my pleasure. You have a lovely site. I’ll be returning for certain. 💞
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Nice poem!!! Well written
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Thank you so much!!! 😊
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Hey Good morning Tex 🙂
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2020/05/17/the-hello-129/
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Hey, Good morning Rory 😊
Thank you, have a wonderful day. Mine is beginning with rain, a very nice thing indeed for here. 😊
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We have sunny skies, warm weather and winds 🙂
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Warm with back and forth rain and sun 😊
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Hey Beautiful Suzanne! Just wanting to send You a hug and say I hope You and Yours are well!!! 🤗❤️🐛🦆🌞🐝💕🦋🙏🏼🦄☕️🌷!!!
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Kindest Thanks Sweet Katy! Such a joy to hear from you. Brightens my day which is quite alive with birdsong. Not sure what they’re up too 🧐 but it’s something 😃! Hope You and Yours are well too!!! 🤗☕️🙏🌷💝☁️🌼🌸🌺🦋🐛🐞❤️🤗!!!
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Love this, Suzanne! You always brighten my day as well and just as I am reading this the sweet birds are singing their little hearts out here as well!😊It IS something, isn’t it! We’re fine, thank You! Onward. 🦆🦋💕🌀🧚🏽🦋🤗
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Onward!! But first….hugs!!! 🤗🌱🎶🦋🧚♀️🦆🦄💞
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BIG FAT ONES!!! 🤗🤗🤗❤️🤗🤗❤️! 😊😄🦋
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🤗❤️🦋🤗❤️🦋🤗❤️🦋!
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🧚🏽🦋🦄🐛🐝☕️🌺!!!
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Reblogged this on Dan Santos’ Take and commented:
ellie894 has pared this beautiful poem, which tugged at my heartstrings and told me it wanted to travel farther…
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It’s very happy to travel 😊, with kindest thanks Dan 🌷
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Nothing seems to be immune from autocorrect. I meant to write “has posted this beautiful poem,” rather than “has pared… “ Sorry. I should have caught it before posting the comment. 🥴
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All good! I am also a victim of autocorrect! You’ve only given me an extra smile this morning. 😊. Nice to know it’s not just me!
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Very beautiful images and timeless quality, Ellie! ❤ All the best!
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Thank you so much, Cheryl! Do take care! 💞
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Beautifully conceived and written .
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Thank you so very kindly, Veena 😊 take good care 🌷
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