Will you, asked the girl
Yes! proclaimed the boy
I didn’t ask yet, giggled the girl
Go ahead, said the boy
Will you love… began the girl
Yes! exclaimed the boy
I didn’t finish, smiled the girl
Go ahead, said the boy
Will you love me for all of our days, asked the girl
Yes… said the boy
And all of our nights too, asked the girl
Yes… said the boy
And the boy gathered the girl in his arms
And he loved her
For all of their days
And for all of their nights
And she loved him too
For all of their days
And for all of their nights
In their quiet cottage by the everlasting sea
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ellie894 September 2018
Love this! Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you so very much! 😊
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The pleasure is all mine!!
😊
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Have a nice evening!
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And the same for you!!!
😊
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Thank you! 😊
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😊😊!!
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Aww. This is so cute and sweet. 🙂
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Thank you Ragazza! I’m happy you like it. 😊
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A beautiful and delightful love story. Such a pleasure to read.
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Thank you very kindly 🌷
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Lovely 🌻
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Thank you 🌷
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🙂
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🌷
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If I had a sensitive bone in my body I would have been touched by this romantic tale. But of course, I don’t. Nope. 😉
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I’m very happy to know you’ve been spared being touched by this romantic tale. 😉. Thank you 🌷
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Maybe something about trucks and stuff next time, OK?
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Ok, trucks and stuff it is! 😊
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cute
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Thank you!
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welcome
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Simply beautiful!
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Thank you kindly, have a brilliant day ☀️
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A sweet little story that reflects the essence of love, Suzanne ❤️
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Thank you Isabelle 😊❤️
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read the wonderful poetry by a talented writer.
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A wonderful poem.
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Thank you so kindly. I’m honored by your reposting. 🌷
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You are welcome ellie. I enjoyed your work.
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That is SOOOOO sweet. Gosh. Thank You and Cheers!!! 🙂
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So happy you like it! You made me smile. Thank you!! Take care 😊
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Yay!!! It’s a smile circle, then. 😄 Thanks and You take care too! 🙂
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I love a happy ending!
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Thank you! 😊
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Two people that know what they want! 😃
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Yes! 😊 thank you for reading!
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“Everlasting sea” sounds like something from an English Romantic… or maybe from a Hindu scripture. How about Longfellow?: “This is the forest primeval,” or, “Footprints in the sands of time.”
A nice compound, and you spare it until the very end. Just one suggestion: maybe use a different title to make the last line more of a surprise? It would add more punch.
That’s my only critique. Have a great day 😀
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Thank you! On all counts. Such thoughtful comments. And that’s a very good suggestion. Titles are something I go back and forth with myself over.
Have a wonderful day ☀️
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You as well! BTW, Longfellow was an American. In his own time, he was better-known than Whitman, then later, public opinion changed. L. is said to have had more Euro influence on him, while W. was more raw American. Whatever. I think you’d like the former, tho.
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Thank you!
I do like Longfellow very much. And yes, probably more than Whitman. Sometime back I read and enjoyed Hiawatha. It has a wonderful use of language and rhythm to it.
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Nice. A kind of love that will last for a lifetime.😍😍😍
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Love is such a treasure. Thank you so kindly 😊❤️
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😍👍🙏
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I also like that you rose to @maxwellthedog’s challenge to write your next one about trucks!
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I wasn’t sure about it at first, but it was awfully fun to give it a go! Thanks 😊
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Ohh simple yet enriching
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So happy you found goodness in it, thank you ☺️
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